The journal entry is more weighted towards increasing animal rights. By using specific examples, and explaining the different types of protesters, the writer explains what is needed for animal rights to be increased. This is a very informative journal; it does not list facts like my previous source, but it explains the politics and the backstage action of animal rights movement. Overall it was incredibly interesting reading about the work behind animal right policy m  I found the writers arguments very strong, and they will be very helpful when writing my research essay.
Ms. D
10/22/2013 06:17:42 am

I'm glad you have found two articles, but I'd like to see a bit more insight into why the article is good/bad/interesting. This could be an interesting topic, but narrowing to something manageable will be key.

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